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Before we start writing
in Word, Final Draft or wherever
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you want to write the script,
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I'm going to recommend
use two things.
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In principle, make the runway.
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But the recommendations are:
one, work with slips or chips,
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and if they have any surface,
be a table, a wall or whatever,
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try to work on the runway
As I'll show you later
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like I did in my movie,
it works on almost everything
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and try to see it in time.
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It's hard but it will help them a lot
at the time of writing the script.
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Maybe if they put the computer near
they will be able to visualize it
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and go writing it
as they read it.
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On the other hand, what they can do is,
a little less romantic,
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but they can work with Excel
or with a spreadsheet.
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I with "Petit",
with my script partners
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work directly with the Excel.
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We made a model, we made a format
and we are completing the cells.
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Let's see in this lesson
how I did it with the movie
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"How most things work"
and how I do it in the "Petit" series.
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Let's see how it works
that synopsis taken to runway.
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Imagine that the synopsis is
as vertebrae, we already know the order,
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but now we must add
more vertebrae,
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we must start to put the ribs,
the shoulder blades, the clavicles
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and let's know what other bones
exist in the human body,
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but more or less we should be forming
that structure so that later,
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when we write the script,
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is as if we put
not only the soul but also the flesh.
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But we need to know that that script
can stand up.
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So let's work a little more
on that structure.
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I work with Excel.
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I worked a lot as an administrative assistant
in a company.
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That made me familiarize
with the spreadsheets.
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And is that to let it develop
the creative part needs structure.
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Then I go and I come
between the spreadsheet
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and the blank page with the pencil.
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So I'm going to show you how I work
with the escaleta in episodes of "Petit".
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We're going to work with the same chapter.
At that time,
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was called
"My imaginary pet exists."
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The topics he addresses are reality
and imagination, and pets.
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And the synopsis of that chapter
we just gave it, but I repeat it:
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"It's the week of the pets
at school,
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Petit must draw his,
but the problem is that he does not have.
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So he draws
his imaginary pet: a dog
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He asks a dog for his parents,
but they give him
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a very unfriendly bird.
While Petit tries to draw it,
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the bird escapes
and when trying to retrieve it,
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Petit meets Tadeo,
a dog that turns out to be the same
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as his imaginary pet ".
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Immediately next to
I put the detonator,
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which is what causes,
what leads to the action.
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The teacher proposes that each one
draw his pet,
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but Petit does not have one.
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"I do not have a pet,
what am I going to draw?"
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I pretty much know that
if the episode lasts seven minutes,
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the trigger should appear
to the minute, minute and a half as much,
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as to have time
to develop it
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And then I write down Petit's wish.
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What does Petit
throughout the chapter?
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Petit wants a pet,
that I have to be very clear about.
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This I'm going to keep in mind
throughout the writing of the script.
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Then I get to work
on the actions and the reactions.
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Let's see.
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The first action is that Petit
asks his parents for a pet
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on the pretext that at school
they asked him to draw a pet
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and that he has no way of doing homework.
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His parents accept,
but if he takes care of her.
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Petit fantasizes that the mascot
that his parents give him
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is the Tadeo that he drew.
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Notice here that
starting to have more actions,
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and it is already a little more developed
than we put in the synopsis.
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Now, what will happen to this action?
What will cause Petit's request?
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Petit's request causes a reaction:
they give him an unfriendly bird,
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very far from his expectations.
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This makes Petit
have to trigger again.
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Like a chess turn,
each one is moving.
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Now Petit what he's going to do
is try by all means
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make friends with his bird,
sing, play together, draw,
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and nothing, "I wish you were like Tadeo" ,
tells him.
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Remember that Petit's desire,
in the background, is to have a pet,
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does not necessarily
do the homework for the school.
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What will happen from Petit's attempt
to make friends with his pet?
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The bird looks at the picture and then,
looking through the window,
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I see a dog equal
to Petit's drawing.
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Then he goes crazy
and tries to get Petit's attention
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so that he realizes that the imaginary dog
he drew is nearby.
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Then, the bird indicates
where is the real Tadeo.
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This is a reaction
that would not have happened
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if the parents had not
given him a bird,
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if Petit had not made the attempt
to draw him and become his friend,
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and if the bird had not
had access to Petit's drawing.
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What will happen now? It's going to happen
that Petit runs out
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and in the climax we realize
that Petit's pet,
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that he had imagined,
exists.
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Petit runs away because the bird
escapes through the window
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and Petit goes after him. That way,
Petit is found,
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through the action of the bird,
with his imaginary pet.
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Finally, Petit draws Tadeo
and they ask him in class:
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"Why did you choose a dog
and not a bird?"
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He says he did not choose him
but the pet chose him.
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They are some notes and they are some things
that can come to serve
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as reminders
or as a structure, basically,
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at the time of sitting
to write a script.
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Before you sit down yourselves,
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try to mark in an Excel
or in a list, it does not matter,
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or maybe in the same program
you are using,
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the test of marking which are
the hits and which are the counterpoints.
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What are the actions,
what are the reactions.
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Mark what are
the topics you are playing,
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have the synopsis that they wrote
by hand,
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always think what is
what triggers the action,
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what is the character's desire
and whether he will achieve what he wanted or not.
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Finally, in this case, Petit
ends up getting what he wanted,
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he was a pet and, coincidentally,
ends up with the pet he imagined.
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Another thing you can do if you do not want
use a spreadsheet,
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is to use
posters or colored papers.
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This is an example
of how was the
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of the movie I wrote
with Esteban Garelli,
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and that I directed, which is called
"How almost all things work "
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This is how the movie script
looked outside the word processor
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or outside the computer.
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What I did was to separate
the smaller scenes
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into narrower roles,
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the longer scenes
into longer papers
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and then, in a different color,
in red,
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the most important points,
the turning points,
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the midpoint or moments where
reveals a very important information
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and then, in other colors,
as green,
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I put some moments
as interviews
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or moments of transition.
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If you watch the movie, you will notice
that in the middle you have
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brief interviews with the characters,
as if it were a documentary.
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In this way, what was I looking for?
I was trying to know, more or less,
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if the movie was balanced,
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as if I were watching
the film already in edit.
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And I was trying to see if I was able
to hold the movie
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with interesting moments
every X amount of time.
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If I already saw that there were
many yellow pieces of paper
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and there was no pink paper,
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was that a lot of things were happening
without any twist.
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And as if they were a shelf,
I should try to put
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a support in the middle so that
that shelf would not make a belly.
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My fear was if I would be able
to hold
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the interest of the spectators
for 90 minutes.
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So, I tried to visualize
the feature film in cork.
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If you have a bigger wall,
or maybe on tables, using chips.
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There are many systems,
but I recommend them a lot
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because that way they can start
to visualize in time and space
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what they are going to narrate,
what are the interesting moments,
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what are the moments
of transition
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and more or less what is the duration
that your audiovisual piece will have.
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If you can do this, and once
you finish it to write,
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it seems to me that they will have
done the task
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and they will have at least
a smaller dose of Anguish
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or uncertainty at the time
of starting to write the script.
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Well, we already have a synopsis,
we have the runway
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and now we finally get to write
the first chapter of our series.
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