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Jay, how are you?

Good, good.

Yeah, I'm just doing some work. Thank you. I'm on the computer.

Hey, I was actually going to call you anyway.

You know your story is due in four days, right?

Today's the 10th.

Yeah, I need you. Where are you on it?

Okay.

Look, I don't want to be that guy, but you got to get it finished.

This is, we're almost past the deadline, or we're almost to the deadline, and

you have been flacking. This is two in a row now. So you got to get it and get

it done, okay?

Look, I love having you. Your work's great. You know that.

Well, if you need, I can fly out there.

How about that?

You think that would help? Maybe I could help with some ideas or something.

Okay.

You know what? I'll look at flights right now and I'll see what it looks

But just stay on it, okay?

Okay, I'll talk to you.

This fucking guy.

Look at the flights.

Hey,

Daddy. Oh, hey, sweetie. How are you? I'm pretty good.

Good, good, good, good.

Busy working, you know. What are you doing?

Well, I'm working and now I just had a conversation with my guy in Kansas City

and I have to fly there tomorrow.

What? Yeah. No!

Yeah. I wanted to hang out.

Well, I know, I know.

Please don't go.

Look, I have to.

It's almost his deadline. We need this story and I have to motivate him.

Well, can I come with you?

Actually... Please?

That's not a bad idea. You want to come along?

Yeah, I want to come, please.

Yeah, maybe you can help out.

Maybe.

We're great.

Yeah, so we're going to leave tomorrow, okay?

Okay. All right, so listen. Why don't you go upstairs and get a backpack,

Okay. All right.

Hey, Daddy.

Oh, hey.

What you working on?

I'm trying to get this piece done.

I'm behind on my deadline, and I'm just having a joke.

problem focusing on it. I just, it's just this block that I've got going on.

I'm sure you'll get there.

No, no, I know. I just, you know, sometimes I just

get 20 things kind of swirling and just, you know, I just need to,

I need some clarity.

Right. You're really good at what you do, though, so I'm not worried one bit

about you. Oh, I appreciate that, sweetheart. It's just, I just can't. I

can't focus right now, you know?

It's just, I don't know.

It's just, I'm just distracted all the time.

Right. I just need to focus. I need some clarity. I need to get this done.

I mean, it's kind of coming together. I'm just kind of piecing it a little,

then I just go, I don't like it. I don't like it. It's not where I want to go.

I'm sorry about that, Daddy.

It's okay. It's okay. I'll get it done.

Yeah, you seem really stressed.

Yeah, just a little stressed, a little distracted.

Pretty dress. I like the color. It's very bright cherry.

Thank you.

I'm just going out with some friends later, so I got a little dressed up.

Oh, okay. Very good.

Good, good. I'll just be sitting here trying to make words happen and make

something make sense.

All right. Well, do you mind if I watch TV in your bed while I wait for them?

Yeah, sure. Yeah, go ahead. Sure.

Okay, yeah, just hang in my bed and just keep the volume down, would you please?

Sound, noise, distraction.

Of course. And whatnot, okay?

Yeah, all right. Well, good luck, Daddy.

Thank you, sweetheart.

Daddy's at the door.

There we go. I got it.

Hi. Oh, my gosh.

Hi.

Donnie. Hey.

Jay, how are you? Good, good. Thank you for coming. Of course.

This has to be your stepdaughter.

This is. Hold on a second.

Charlie. Yeah.

You've got it. Nice to meet you. Jay.

And this is my stepdaughter. I am. Hi.

I'm Liz.

Donnie, nice to meet you. How old are you? I'm 20.

Oh, really? Me too.

Oh, yeah?

I'm glad that you came by because I really feel good about where I'm at. I'm

kind of stuck with an ending, so maybe we can do a little clapping and eating

it. And girls, if you'd like, you can go on a hangout over there and we can just

talk over business.

Of course. Let's get you motivated.

Cool. Let's do it. I'll show you the kitchen.

Oh, of course. Have fun.

Okay. Let's see what you got.

All right. Like I said, I just need to close to it. I've got about 300 pages. I

know you were asking for five, but maybe we could come up with something.

Sure. Okay.

But as you can see, the story is a little different than what I'm

writing. Yeah, yeah.

Well, let me just... Wow.

Okay. This is...

Let me just see one thing here.

Oh, wow, Jay.

This is very different from the stuff you normally write.

You know, as we talked, I was having some writer's block, which, mind you,

the only time it's ever happened to me. But I was kind of...

Inspired and this is what I have. This is very different from what you normally

write. Yeah, it is and You

know, you know, it's a It's you know, the whole premise is about

an older gentleman who's who's got a younger stepdaughter. I mean he's You

know, he's he's widowed and all like that, but you know, he's just

He's just a lonely guy, but his stepdaughter, she's very active.

And, you know, always bringing some friends around and stuff like that.

I have to ask you, is this something that you kind of fantasize about?

Oh, no, no, no. This is totally fictional.

This is nothing about me. This is just this character that came to my mind.

You know, it's okay if it is.

If this is something that you really thought of, it's okay. My stepdaughter

I, we're very open. Let's put it that way.

Wow.

Okay.

We're just a close family, but we're nothing like that.

Are you sure? I mean, you don't have to feel bad about this or anything.

No. Okay, yeah.

Yeah, I kind of do think about it.

I thought it was just me.

No, no, no.

You want to bring them in, kind of have them act it out a little bit, and we can

walk through it?

I've never thought that might help out, you know, kind of create it. Sure.

Close to this. It can't hurt, right?

It can only help.

Right.

Inspiration always.

Absolutely.

Yeah.

I'm good for it.

All right.

Girls, hey, Charlie.

Come here, honey.

Yeah, Daddy?

So we're going to have you two ladies. And, of course, if Liz is okay with

Yeah.

So Jay wrote a story, and we're going to have you two kind of act it out a

little bit on the couch and just kind of walk through it and see if we can make

sense of it and come up with some kind of ending. Some kind of ending, yeah.

I'll just start with a little simple scenario here that I have in Chapter 2.

Okay, anything to help the story, you know?

Perfect. Just have a seat over there, honey.

Bye.

This is how the story goes. It's about an older gentleman that lives in the

Midwest that has a stepdaughter that he's in

care of because his wife has passed.

It's about how he's having to deal with the taking care of and the

loss of.

But he comes to find out that she is a very

Sexual individual who has her friends over and they

engage and he's watching them.

So in this part here, the two girls, my daughter, or the character's daughter,

sorry, they're kissing and touching and fondling. Okay.

So it just kind of...

go with that and then um and i'll read on so yeah just are you sure

that's okay daddy yeah i mean oh yeah yeah yeah just just just role play for

know just that kind of see that my my character and my stories kind of if if

does work absolutely are you sure it's okay daddy absolutely it's fine okay

you're fine you're sure yeah

Just like that.

She touches.

They look into each other's eyes.

It's the first time he's ever done this.

He's a little hesitant.

But she likes what she sees, what she smells, and

she wants to kiss her.

Is that okay, Daddy?

Yes, yes.

Yeah, please, just kiss and touch.

Yes, her hands roam her girlfriend's

body. She feels how soft the touch is.

She pushes her hair away from her neck to expose the young

zapple neck.

She touches her boobs and reveals them one by one.

Yeah, just like this, Betty? Is this okay?

Yeah, just like that, honey.

I mean, because I don't have a lot of references.

So here you would, what would you naturally want to do here? Because I

always edit this part here.

Is it okay if I kiss her nipple, Daddy?

Yeah, that's okay. Go ahead, honey.

Are you sure? I have that someplace in here.

Go ahead. Yeah, just like that.

Yeah, she grabs her breast.

She stares at them, looks gazingly into her eyes, and then she starts licking

her very erect nipples.

Well, that does work.

Just like that, Daddy?

Is this okay? Am I doing it right, Daddy?

You're doing a great job, sweetie.

You're making this story come to life.

Are you sure this is okay, Daddy?

You're doing a great job, sweetie.

Jay, maybe you can... No, I see that.

She... Yeah, let's put... I'll add that in. You go and you remove her

small, short, very revealing... You want me to remove them now?

Yeah, I'll just add that in here.

I mean it that way.

With your writing.

Oh no, it's definitely helping.

I didn't even see this part coming.

It's okay, here.

Are you going to show us how to do it?

Go ahead.

Yeah, nice and slow.

Jay, you can write at the same time.

She raises her hip up to have the pants.

The short shorts.

Pulled down.

Revealing white panties.

Oh, I'm so sorry.

It's okay.

Oh, wow.

Okay, this is good. Very good.

Go ahead.

In the story, the father does walk in

on his daughter and friend, and they both look at him

with lustful eyes.

And she reaches out and touches

his erection through his pants.

Oh, me, Daddy?

Yes, it would be you doing that, yes.

Just like that?

Yeah, just like that.

It's okay, Daddy.

It's okay, you're doing a great job.

This is a lot hotter than I thought it was going to be.

So you get the gist of what the story is about, okay?

And here in my writings, it kind of goes farther.

I mean, we are role -playing the story out, but

you reveal his cock and admire it

with your friend.

Right here, right now?

Do you want us to act that out?

That's how I write it. I wrote it. So if you... Yeah, please.

Are you her daddy? It's okay.

I think it's okay.

Really? Yeah.

Even though you're not her daddy?

I mean... No, it's okay. It's research.

My part here is...

Jay, if you want to type while... Yeah, no.

And this time, this is where you're shocked because this is the first time

you've seen your... His cock, yes.

And you're kind of like, oh, I shouldn't.

I said, no, I shouldn't.

But you cannot not look. It's, you know, that's... And you...

Make it grow in your hands.

She lightly kisses the tip of his

member.

Is member a good word?

I think that'll work for now.

Like this, Tony?

Yeah, just like that.

She kisses his member.

And it grows in her mouth.

Right in my mouth?

Yeah.

Why are you sure, Daddy?

It's written here, yes. That's how it goes.

Just like that.

Charlie, at this time, what would you be thinking? I need to write something

about your thoughts of what you're seeing here.

I'm just so shocked. I can't believe she's stepping on my dad's dick right

I'm just going to use your name just for reference. Charlie is shocked

by what he is witnessing

as her friend is talking on her father's cock.

It's kind of hot, though. My dad's dick looks really hot.

So this does turn you on.

It's, uh, it's, uh, yeah, I, I like where this is going. I like.

She looks really good at that. I,

yes,

I have to say.

Oh, I have to write that.

My daughter's face has never been so beautiful

before.

seeing her with a cock in her mouth.

Oh, okay.

What else is in your story, Daddy?

I'm open for suggestions where this can go.

Charlie is concerned in how close she has

gotten to Liz's face and her father's cock is

so close.

I'm just a little lost where I should go with this right now.

From here, it was kind of like it just kind of ended and just went on to

Chapter 5.

Is there anything about my daddy joining in?

That's a very good point, Jay.

Okay, I'll just...

Daddy, are you sure that'll be... His friend joins.

And I guess just for acting purposes, Jay, if you want to be the friend.

Yeah, really?

Okay, I could... Yeah, I'll write about it.

You can write after.

Okay, I can do that.

I am kind of...

Oh my God, Daddy, are you sure?

I'm kind of excited.

Is this okay with you, Daddy?

Yeah, I... It's for the story.

Anything to help you write your story.

We're going to go right over here.

Yeah? Yeah.

Get up to my room.

Oh, she softly kisses his tooth.

As her father watches another man take his daughter.

You're kneeling down next to her. There you go.

In the story, they stay very close because they're close friends.

Yeah, have at it sweetie.

Look at that.

This is good material.

This is where you look at

what's going on over here.

You too are shocked to see what your father is

doing right now.

So this would not shock you to see?

Do you like looking at his dick in my mouth, Daddy?

I like your pretty little mouth.

Except you have a very, very pretty mouth.

And Jay, do they go into, in the story, do we go into maybe some sexual

encounter?

I would think so.

Oh, really?

Are you sure, Daddy?

You've never done this before.

It's been so long since I've done this, too.

I would say yes, yes.

They would... What's a word I want to find?

What do they do?

Fuck.

And they put it in their pussies.

They fuck and they put it in their pussies. They take pictures.

Until they jib all over our faces.

Boy,

this story is just really, really kind of getting...

We haven't gotten to the ending yet.

She's swallowing my... She swallowed

my cock.

I'll edit that part out of this member, but I'll say cock.

Yes, I think it's time they... As my daughter said, they fuck.

Thank you.

the way I thought it was.

Sorry, I wasn't meaning to touch you.

If you'd like, you can... Yeah, why don't you stand up

here and let me pull these down.

And you may sit on top of me.

Yeah, I think that's a great idea.

This must be a hell of a thing.

Oh, my God.

Oh, your daddy's dick is so good.

That's so hard to see you.

How's your friend doing? So good.

How is it, sweetie?

So good, Daddy.

Are you sure it's okay?

It's okay.

Yeah, you want us to grind on those cogs?

Yeah. Yeah, let's grind on them together.

Oh,

shit.

Just make sure you're taking mental notes.

Yeah, that's right.

No, I am. I'm mental.

I think this is working good.

I see the two of them, they're close,

close together while having sex with them.

The kiss.

Maybe turn around for me.

I can't believe you've never been shown this good cock with an animal.

Oh, fuck yes.

It's okay, sir.

It really is, baby.

It really is.

Oh, my God. Is that it? Yes.

Yes. Yes.

Yes. Yes.

Yes. Yes. Yes.

Yes. Yes.

Yes.

You often spank your daughter? Yeah.

When she's naughty.

Mother.

And you're always naughty, correct?

Uh -huh.

My daughter's naughty, too.

She gets spankings.

She begs for spankings.

Yes, please spank me.

Yes.

Yes, spank me.

Yes, but...

Maybe you should lay back and let her, like, eat your pussy while

we still fuck.

What do you think, Daddy?

That's probably a good plot twist.

Yeah.

Let's come over here on this couch.

This is hard. I'm going to ask for words and what to do.

Oh, my.

Oh, fuck you.

Spanker, daddy.

Spanker. What a bad girl.

He stares into his daughter's eyes as she's being taken by a man from behind.

While he's fucking the other man's daughter.

This is so...

Oh, my God.

Oh,

my God.

Oh,

my God.

Oh, my God. Oh, my God.

Oh, my God.

the story's writing itself.

You were my

inspiration for this.

You don't find that weird, do you?

I shouldn't.

How about you rub her clit and make it get it all.

Yeah, just like that.

Yeah,

just like that.

Oh,

my God, yes. His long strokes penetrate her.

Can you put it

Her mouth is so beautiful. I mean, her mouth is so beautiful.

Oh, my God.

Yeah.

Fuck, yeah, this place is so... I want to feel every inch of you.

Fuck.

Oh, my God, he's making my legs shake.

I'm hungry.

I thought of something.

What's that?

It could be a real plot twist.

Yeah? What's that, Daddy?

What if you go with your daughter and I go with mine?

Shit.

Yeah, what she said. Shit.

Is that okay, Daddy?

It's research. It's for the book.

I mean, we have a release date, and I can... Absolutely.

Oh, you want to feel this cock? I think that's a great idea.

Okay,

I'm... How do you want me, Daddy?

The words I've wanted to hear for a long, long time.

I want you to sit on me.

Yeah? And ride me.

Yeah?

I wonder

what

this would feel like

That's quite alright.

Yes. Yes. Yes.

Yes.

Torment him.

Torment him.

Can we add that in, Jay?

What do I do? I want to see them 69.

Before you do, I feel like Daddy's got a birthday.

Please, let me just see you.

Oh, look at you, David.

I could write that in, so it's very easy.

Oh,

I like this, too.

See how far you can get it down your sexy little throat.

Oh, fuck, Daddy.

That feels so good.

Oh, my God.

I love this view.

I don't know what got into me.

Ejaculate.

Orgal.

Okay, sorry. I need these.

I can accept a huge fucking word.

You're all part of the babies on our face.

I didn't want to talk about babies. I mean, that's just my daughter.

Yes, give it to me, daddy.

Yeah.

Oh, funny.

Look in her eyes as she's being taken by her dad. It's fucking hot.

It is.

I just worded differently in the book.

Yes.

Give

it to me,

Daddy. Yes, please.

Please give it to me.

Here?

No, I'm not. I'm going to exceed 500. Can I go over 500 pages?

That's okay.

Daddy. Yeah. Oh, my God. Oh, my God.

Oh, my God. Oh, my God.

Yes, please.

Yes, come for me.

Yes,

come for me, Daddy. Come for me.

Yes, come for me.

Yes.

Yes,

please.

I can't break that.

Oh, yeah.

Yeah.

Yeah. I did.

I did. I came.

I came inside you. Thank you, Daddy. Oh, my God. I can't believe it.

Oh. Oh.

Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh.

Oh. Oh.

Oh. Oh. Oh.

Oh.

Bye. Bye.

Doesn't that take us to a whole different category?

It's erotica.

You handle that, right?

Erotica? Absolutely.

Okay, then it's erotica.

Okay, I'm going to get back to typing.

The part where they taste.

They taste each other.

Thank you for giving us all that delicious gin.